Hi, Holly. I'm Harley from Paroa school. This is a nice blog post you've made a far amount of info for everyone and the little animation you made at the end is pretty cool too. It would be nice to see a little more facts because at the moment there's not much info but enough it's really quick to read through it maybe some fore facts could make it more longer?. Apart from that it's pretty good!
Hi Holly, Carter from Paroa School here; I think that this post is very important for the spreading of knowledge, I love the post and think the facts are really good.
I think some of the facts may need to be in detail like: Rainforests produce MOST of the air not all of it also you said that we won't have anywhere to live whih condradicts your point, if we don't cut down trees we can't make houses, other than that it's great. The post is great and you worded it really well and I loved the animation. It was great how you explained the importance o the rainforests.
My favourite part is defintely the animation and how you visualized the bulldozer taking out the trees and ruining the rainforest; also how you showed how the trees grow.
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ReplyDeleteHi, Holly. I'm Harley from Paroa school. This is a nice blog post you've made a far amount of info for everyone and the little animation you made at the end is pretty cool too. It would be nice to see a little more facts because at the moment there's not much info but enough it's really quick to read through it maybe some fore facts could make it more longer?. Apart from that it's pretty good!
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Hi Holly, Carter from Paroa School here; I think that this post is very important for the spreading of knowledge, I love the post and think the facts are really good.
ReplyDeleteI think some of the facts may need to be in detail like: Rainforests produce MOST of the air not all of it also you said that we won't have anywhere to live whih condradicts your point, if we don't cut down trees we can't make houses, other than that it's great. The post is great and you worded it really well and I loved the animation. It was great how you explained the importance o the rainforests.
My favourite part is defintely the animation and how you visualized the bulldozer taking out the trees and ruining the rainforest; also how you showed how the trees grow.
Keep up the good work, Carter.