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Wednesday 20 May 2020

My Persuasive writing

To close or not to close the boarders because of Covid-19?

I agree to leave the boarders closed so 
we don't lose half of the country's population, and to make sure our people are protected.
I agree because if we break our bubbles 
this infectious virus will get into our
system and spread so easily.

The risks of peoples health are far to high for this little country/island, and by letting tourist in are very risky, just imagine all of that horrible spread happening right in front of you'r eyes.

It would be a lot more safer and healthier if only New Zealanders were able to travel in New
Zealand and spend our own money in our own  country.

So in conclusion I strongly believe that the boarders should stay closed.



9 comments:

  1. Hey Holly this is really well written,
    I also reckon the boarders should be closed.
    from Payton

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    1. Hi Payton
      thank you for commenting on this post!
      😀

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  2. Hey there Holly!
    I totally agree with you, the boarder should stay closed.
    I loved how you decribed what would happen to the people.
    Honestly, I thought this was an amazing piece and there is nothing I would change in future!
    Keep up the good work, Jemma

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    1. Thank you Jemma
      this is a very nice comment
      that you added on my blog!

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  3. Hi Holly, I am Taijah from Glenbrae school, I really enjoyed your poster and I really agree with you that the boarders should stay closed keep up the good work.

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    2. Thanks Taijah
      for commenting!😁

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  4. great job on covid-19 but i want to see more of these keep up the great work.and did you know in the world right now 2.19 Million people survived covid-19 and maybe more keep up the great work.


    Hayden.

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    1. Hi Hayden
      thank you for this positive comment!

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